whistleonwild

15 Jul 2008 11:51 pm

redo, part the first

corosa what is that face.

OKAY I JUST COULD NOT STAND THAT LAST VERSION (which is still there, I'll be taking it down soon). So I redid it, and now it's been split up into two pages. Most of the original dialogue on the previous version will be on the second page, which will come tomorrow! ...hopefully.

AND THEN YOU WILL STILL GET A NEW FRIDAY PAGE DON'T WORRY I'M NOT COPPING OUT ON THIS i hope. ;__; since physics class suddenly got assloads harder.

whistleonwild

15 Jul 2008 11:55 pm

replies to previous page

Imi: ffff I feel like I'm overdoing the swearing sometimes :( it was just unlucky that the characters who swear the most appeared the first (I don't even think I'm exaggerating here, none of the other characters swear quite this much. except for one. maybe)

YJK: oh god. pretend you never saw that page, because the dialogue's the same on the next page but with better paneling/pacing/art! at least that's how the plan goes.

amiko_16: well now there is both toning and banter! :DDD

Mythee: oh dear, you're not going to survive long then. it gets worse!

CloverLeaf: shh shhh same dialogue/possibly same panels are appearing again soon ;__; laugh at those ones, they'll be better!

Rizu: YEAH WELL I TOOK IT OUT JUST TO SPITE YOU. actually no it goes on the next page. :(

ghost and satero disagree strongly about your otping. satero also disagrees equally strongly about bearing children, especially a hundred million of them.

Pan: FFF FFF DROWNING IN LAWYERSSSSSSSS

TakaKouya: oh god, yeah that was pretty much the best line on the page :( HEY HEY WAIT NO GIVE IT BACK YOU CAN'T DO THAT

oni-bu: THEY ARE SUCH FAGS AREN'T THEY also satero is insulted. ghost > him?! you better watch out, he'll be finding your address soon. >:||||||||

Kuromei

16 Jul 2008 01:04 am

lmfao XDDD Why do I find their cussing so funny? X3 I'm eating at the comp, and I damn near spewed my food to laugh reading this and the other version. XDD

lol Corosa doesn't know what he's gotten himself into. X3 He shoulda run when he had the chance. >3

Imi

16 Jul 2008 03:35 am

Aaaah, Corosa's face on that bottom panel. Someone needs to give that poor man a hug.

Except Satero. No one wants that.

amiko_16

16 Jul 2008 07:50 am

Well double win, then >:D

Corosaaa poor ho, he looks so intimidated XD;;

oni-bu

17 Jul 2008 01:06 am

pffffftt OH GHOST. x'D WHAT A HOOT YOU ARE.

youfindmyaddressandIwilltieyouupandkeepyouthere. : |


<333 heheheh Looks like Satero is calling his bluff!! >x'D I wonder what his real name is, and people don't seem to have a lot of confidence in Corosa, BUT I DO!!! ;A; OH COROSA BABY! COME TO ME! *cuddles corosa*

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